
Okay, I promise this will be more of a book review than the last one. I found this book in Target, and the cover sold me. A young boy climbing a giant mayan pyramid? Yeah you’ve got my interest. All you have to say is Mayan and I’ll sit up straight and listen. It’s a secret nerdy obsession of mine, any ancient history that is. But for some reason I’ve always had a soft spot for the Mayan. I needed a book to listen to on the banks of Alaskan rivers, {don’t laugh Dad} so I thought this was perfect.
Jake Ransom’s parents mysteriously disappeared while on a dig in Mesoamerica. Three years later, Jake and his sister Katy are dealing with the loss of their parents. Things get weirder when an invitation comes to attend a museum exibxit in London. But through an ancient artifact and conjoining necklaces left to them by their parents, Jake and Katy are transported to an ancient world where it seems that people from every time and place have converged. Mayans, Romans, Chinese, Africans, cave men and even dinosaurs live together in a valley, protected from the evil clutches of the Skull King. Jake and Katy have to emerge themselves in this world while they find a way to get back home. But unexpected clues lead them to their parents: did they know of this place? Are they alive? But they are running out of time to discover all their answers. The Skull King awaits on the border of the city, and what he wants most: Jake.
There are a lot of good and bad things about this book, in my opinion.
The Bad. James Rollins is great with his descriptions, thats the problem, he’s TOO great with his descriptions. Everything is so over described and superfluous that I was getting annoyed. I was listening to in on my iPod, so I couldn’t just skim over the descriptions like I would have in a book. It really almost killed the good plot he had going. Even a character spoke using an insane over intense description! I mean, can’t the sun just shine? Does it always have to break across the horizon in a glorious greeting to the new day, gently illuminating the valley below, and caressing the shadows with it’s soft golden rays of hope, till they give way to the light? {HA! That was pretty good, I should be an author :) } Don’t get me wrong, vivid and beautiful descriptions are a part of any good writing, but when you get something like that every other sentence, it gets old-fast.
He can’t say: Jake sat in his classroom, watching the minutes pass by on the clock. Instead it’s:
The inky black arrows, frozen on the clock taunted Jake. He stared at them, as if his will alone would make them move. And when they finally inched passed, it seemed not enough. He would be stuck in this forever, and the arrows would mock him for all eternity. {I made that up, incase anyone wants to get mad at me for making fun of published writing}
Sure, that might sound good. But every little, non important things was described that way, and I really wanted more plot. It was a good thing I didn’t have anything to do, or I would have put the book down forever. {I guess I could have got out of the boat and fished for Alaskan Salmon. But hey, I’d already caught {and released} more than my limit of fish that day. }
Okay, can you tell that bugged me? On to other things.
I was a little unsure if I like the whole multi-cultural thing at first. But I soon became okay with that. But the dinosaurs? I don’t know why, but dinos spell one thing to me: C-H-E-E-S-Y. He could have ditched the dinos, and I’d be fine.
And lastly, The Skull King. {another personal rant here} I dislike villains for the sake of villainy. And the Skull King was like so many other villains: Evil and scary, almost non human. Bent on evil and taking over the world. But what they lack is personality. Why do they want to take over the world? What are they going to do once they get it? What happened to this once innocent infant to make them so bad? To paraphrase something I read: A character who acts without real motivation is by definition melodramatic, doing outrageous things for the sake of the thrill it gives the reader--not because it makes sense for the character to do so
The Skull King was melodramatic. A great villain, and so much like many others before him.
The Good. {You were hoping I’d get to that?}
There is some great mystery here that’s keeping me up at night, awaiting the sequel. Jake’s parents, the company they work for, the world itself. I can’t wait to find out the answers. James Rollins has done a great job of working up the suspense.
Like I said, I’m an ancient history dork. So this was really fun for me to get thrown into a world where all the worlds history lives at one place. The way they live, the “alchemy” that is their technology. It was all very exciting and interesting, and something I’d never read before. Yeah for new ideas!!!
And his characters. Jake is smart and mature, determined to follow in his parents shoes. He makes friends in the city that are great supporters to his character. While his sister Katy brings some light heartedness and “teenage” into the story.
I really liked this book, and I will read the next one, but I really hope that James can tone down the over dramatization, or I might just have to puke my way through it.
